I love the emotion you portray here. the stiched heart means you have been hurt before. You want someone to save you but no one is your hero. I love the mausoluem line as you feel alone and can hear your echoing heartbeat as all you can hear is your own silence. Your mind is your own weakness with depression crawling through it. The shackles are your feelings getting the best of you. Clangor is a word not widly used so well done. I'm not sure what tears have to do with it though lol. A loud noise. I love how you apologize for nothing you did wrong. I love the sadness that this piece fills you with. As it shows your a true talent. 5/5