I love memory poems as they hold so much for the heart to be desired. :)

I love the lips being described as cinnamon. As lips are so sweet and fun to kiss. The smile is sweet and its a great reminder to hold tight to you. Being hand and hand is a great feeling. I love the simplicity of it but its so romantic. I love the way you portray memories as eating. Its very unique with what you hold inside.

A kiss is a beautiful thing as well and when shared with another person especially your love its the best feeling. The light is in your heart that shines bright when being loved. Depression is very difficult to overcome but the way you paint it, it could be filled with hope as you share each other. You want this person with you before they fade from life. This poem is unique in every way. The metaphor you used is fantastic. :) 5/5

Lovely poem

Wow amazing writing. I love the piece.

MT, I found this so beautiful despite the sadness it possess. Love the words you have used to describe the pain and heart-break and the imagery which comes out is amazing.

Keep writing:)

This is such a moving poem!

Great work!!!