Darkness always consumes us but I think its easier to give into it when we have been hurt by people. There are so many things that can make us happy or sad. I think everyday we always have to battle even waking up. It's human nature to fall into rock bottom and depression when things go wrong. When things go write its easier to deal with things in life because we are happier. I think happier people always have a clearer mind into what they think and such. When your heart has been hurt it's easy to think of the darker side. Thats why I loved the first line because I think it's easier to fall then get back up.

I love the hope you bring to erase the darkness or sad feelings in the first line. There is always hope and help out there when you believe or want to change. I love how you said dear too. So my mind is thinking it could be a close friend or love you are writing this too. I love how so many words have so many meanings in different contexts. We should never give into anything that makes us feel dark or hinders our life at all.

Dreams has so many things that you can talk about. I think here you mean that dreams in life and hope and happiness. I love how you make the readers minds wonder to many different possiblities. Dreams really can come true no matter who you are. I love how you support this person no matter how fall they have fallen. There is always hope. 5/5