Comments : Parkway Drive: The Traveler

  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    Crystal, crystal, crystal. Wow. Just freaking wow. The title is my favorite title I have ever read honestly. I love parkway drive as it has so many hidden meanings to it. And the poem definitely reflects it's message. I'm not going to break this down, because I cannot do it any justice. The metaphor here is very deep and well written. While I was reading this my first thought was going missing as a literal sense, but I don't believe that to be the case here. I believe this person was or is a shell of whom they used to be as in depression makes them a whole different person. My reason for saying that is the hospital. Not psyically missing but emotionally. As in suicide, self harm... Ect.. Each stanza here holds it's own story of emotions and you brought them all together well. Well enough to make a beautiful poem. It's a shame this has no comments. Anyways that ending... You are too afraid to be alone and you are afraid for them to be alone. Outstanding. 5/5