I think you explained yourself pretty well. I didn't find the flow rocky and towards the end, I was unsure of how to feel. Whether I should feel sad because the man has no feelings and no thoughts and as the result he is going to be left on his own... or whether to just accept it.

See I like how you manage to connect with me. I just liked the humorous line " Technology has come so far."
Pretty much, I like how you developed the plot of the poem to come up with a straightforward conclusion. 5/5