Comments : My Morning Friend

  • 10 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    This is a very sweet poem that made me smile. You brought to life what love can be. Love can be anything that touches your heart and I loved this poem so much. The flow was perfect as each stanza is about the same length. I love the story feel to this too. You start out small then you build up to the end which you reveal what the reader wants. I liked the way you did it. No one really knows what you are going into or where you are. Then you slowly unreveal the pieces of the puzzle. I like familiarity of the people as you go there a lot so they know you well. Do really there is more than one friendship here. But the biggest one is personal to you although not a person. It still holds so much love and captures the reader at least it did for me. I love the wording at the end. It says you are not a morning person but your friend helps you wake up. :) 5/5