This is a very cute and interesting poem from you haha. I adore monolouges as well so that totally drew my attention. I love how you talk about a lil girl here. I love that she seems to be smarter than she appears. Nothing should concern a child at all but this child is very witty and has a stubborn heart haha. I think we all want to be free and smarter and no one truly knows what we are doing here in life. That is what we have to find out. I like how there seems to be a narrator here or a angel or something or someone watching this girl. We all have our own opinion and believe what we want to learn. I think this girl could be you as well or you when you were little. We question a lot of things in life too so I think we can connect to this character. Imagination cones from a childs like wonder and this girl has a good one. I loved this poem though as it shows how smart lil girl or lil kids can be. Very interesting haha. I loved it. Xx 5

Really amazing! Such a wonderful way you've written it. By far my favourite! 10/5

A very interesting writing style! I love finding new types of poetry :). My only criticism is that I don't think this is a monologue- surely it's a dialogue because there are two people speaking? Forgive me if I'm wrong :)

The dialogue is well done. It takes a while but I come to believe the child is truly as wise as she sounds. Certainly you would not expect such words from one so young.
I might suggest that the format may be easier to read if you break the dialogue into a playwright style: starting each statement with a new line, then you would also start scene statements in new lines.
Well done.