Really cute! It's soft and sweet just like a lullaby! Good use of words too

This really is beautiful. I am starting to grow more fond of acrostic poems. You start out so soft and gentle like a lil child here. You want to fall asleep with the lullaby and the symphonies of their voice. I think we all want to feel peace before we fall asleep so I really liked this line. You surrender your words and I like again how the first two lines connect. You are getting more tired as you seem to be staying up late. Utter words is what you said. So I see both people here starting to fade into slumber. But I like it because I think we all feel more at peace if we have someone next to us whom we care about.

The third and fourth lines go together as well. You are falling asleep or haze probably means you are sleeping but don't remember falling asleep lol. But the dreams come and they are so full of peace and happiness. O know you talk about floating on clouds. I like this because through out the whole poem it is soft. Even the word lullaby can bring happiness or even a smile to anyone's face. The clouds are so soft but they make a nice pillow so I also love that deeper connection you present.

The last three lines are perfect and wrap up the poem so well in my opinion. We all want silence I feel like it's a dream so I like abide like you have to stay silent no matter what. Maybe in dreams if we have peaceful one's we have to see and charish the beauty in them. Blunders swallow you in one glup. I think that could mean you are back to reality and now you have to bare the burden of a bad life. The last line is perfect. You are filled with emotions because you just had this peace inyour heart.but now you feel sadness again. I like the hope and then sadnesd or burden. KuJust my opinion. Great read though. Xx 5

Alanis what can I say wrong about it? I can't it's excellent. I love how for the beginning it seems like a child is telling a story. Excellent write. Good luck with all your writing.

Wow, this is amazing. I love it. I agree with Skyler, i like how it starts off like a child telling a story. Awesome touch, i will definitely look forward to reading more of your poems.

I love it!!! It's amazing and very creative!!

Nicely done for something that you did for the first time, I was assuming that cause you said it was something "new". Anyhow, I like the combination of simple words and phrases that turned into something quite original. All in all, a very good one.

Av stayed long avin not read acrostic, this is really a piece, gud work

Beautiful and more like a song which engages you throughout. Nice usage of words hun!

Amazing poem!

Keep writing:)

Beautiful imagery. Great piece. Lots of emotional depth.

This is an excellent acrostic poem - beautiful language employed throughout. Well done and all the best,
Ben