Comments : Your Turn

  • 10 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Nice job. Great use of emotion. This is so common. I just wish I knew more about the world you and the others are creating, I want to help and join. I want to bethere for you guys.

  • 10 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    Awesome we all want to be loved 5/5 I really enjoyed this line after line.:-)