Comments : Today is Your Wedding...

  • 8 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    Awe I loved reading this piece it was so beautifully written and heart warming to say the least! The narration was just beautiful in first person and there wasn't any grammar mistakes that I could see. it's just a story going from stanza to stanza and it just makes a heart feel light. Nice write 5/5

    - Moria Bella Bair -

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    This sad such a beautifully written piece.

    So tranquil.
    Em