Comments : My Pain

  • 10 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    I am speechless
    I love this poem!

    • 9 years ago

      by TheDarkCloudBehindthePoet

      Thank you so much Burning Angel. Sorry it took so long to reply. I'm glad you liked it: )

  • 9 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    My pain stemmed from the inability to vent to others,
    I had countless amounts of problems since I could remember,
    from getting kicked out of college to never being able to run again,
    all I wanted to do is find one person who would listen,

    No one cared but one person and I dare not burden him with all my problems,
    maybe I should have,
    maybe if I did, I wouldn't be stained with death,
    something that will follow me forever,
    ^ THAT made me wanna cry really bad this poem put a punch

    • 9 years ago

      by TheDarkCloudBehindthePoet

      Thank you Joker Queen. I hate the fact that I had to go through this pain but it makes me who I am today. Thank you for the love and don't cry :) with people like you in the world spreading love. Tears can never last forever.

  • 9 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    *smiles* Thank you hun I have my past too but jokers everywhere bow down and give everyone a smile at the cost of their own misery lol life is funny filled with grief misery and love but love is sometimes not enough good luck :)