Comments : Runaway Creases

  • 10 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    I am glad you wrote this poem. This is by far my favorite of your new poems. And I will nominate when I can tomorrow. Anyway now to the poem. I can see this as a little kid or teenager with anger in their heart. I love the beginning because you seem to be going on emotion. Rushing to to get away faster. I love the details again you used. The whole thing is very vivid and it plays out so well. Okay it seems like this person lives in a broken home and they just need to get away from everything. Then the twist at the end happens. That realization of having no other home but this broken one hurts inside. I hate that feeling. Anyway I cannot say enough about this poem. Nominated haha when I can.