I like what you say here because it seems in the start you are saying that you were happier now you are sad. I like the use of the window as well because I think it's nice to look out of it when we thimk about our lives. Our thoughts always seem to grow more and more when we are sad. Life is truly a battle and we will win and lose. Happiness is very hard to find as well. So when it embraces us we should not push it away at all. I like the wording in the third stanza here. You show the reader the eyes of a character that is struggling. Overall I love the tone through out. You stay consistant throughout. Well written

Very hopeful words, out of sad contemplative thoughts.