Comments : Goodbye World

  • 10 years ago

    by Burningdaisy13

    OMG! This is amazing Kaitlyn! Great job on the poem! Remember, if you need anyone to talk to, come to me. :')

  • 10 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    This poem is great. The title fits so very well with the rest of the poem. Which I feel is a plus. I think what you said here is that you feel like this person is pushing you away. The pain of a heart can be a heavy burden to take on by yourself. It's hard when the one person you love sometimes is the one that hurts you as well. Overall this is a great poem and you expressed your emotions well. I lovef the tones you used as well. Even though its a love poem you used sadness as well. Good job

  • 10 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Woooooooooooooooooooooo

    very nice, heart touching really at-least my.