Lovely write. Makes me smile and remember the times when I was a child and how myself and my brothers would put carrots out for the reindeer on Christmas Eve. Ha ha! Cute poem.

Love this Andrew! The title speaks well to work with the poems meaning. You wrote about reindeer. Not a lot of people would do this at all.

First-: What a beautiful scene you have painted. It's winter and cold described by the night time, but here you took a unique spin on things. The reader does a great job in thinking about what will come next, since the title is reindeer, it could be around Christmas time. This is a great set up.

Second: What a beautiful scene as well, this is more of a description more than nature but I believe it works well with the poem. First you have it being winter time but then Santa comes and the reindeers pull his sleigh. They are never late because they know how this goes and work together.

Ending- All around the world they go never stopping at all for anyone. I agree though this does have a great nostalgic feeling to it, when we will little and we waited for Santa to come. What a great poem, well done!