Strong! You opened up in a ambush of emotions, what a write. This is an great poem truly, it really captures a lot of strong feelings which have built up over your life, the way you decided to put this one together is unique and really neat. I like the idea of words being grenades because it is so true. I never have thought of that metaphor before though so thanks for opening my mind. It's strong I feel empowered reading it and seeing how it started with you feeling captured and as the poem goes on you begin to pull the trigger sort of speak and let all of this persons verbal grenade bounce off of you and become a grenade yourself by expressing yourself and how you feel! Very powerful, very telling. Stay strong.

I don't know what to say , its the most powerful piece i,v ever seen ' they were more than just words , it was like a painting ; of the life eternal prison , the sorrow withing the knowledge the wings of sadness that keep us flying into the colorless nothingness ' it's a confusion between reality what we want and need and the thoughts about where we going , the madness what may exist beyond and within .

just so loved :)

Very well written, it brought back a lot of memories all of a sudden, love it