Comments : Loneliness...

  • 10 years ago

    by Bonaventure Onuabuchi

    The good use of personification in the work made it worth of my liking. The sun and moon were presented in line one and two as living beings with hands and mouth respectively. Loneliness was addressed as living beings with hands and mouth in these lines.... "It crept on me and held me close" & "It called me friend while I was afraid", Good one! ......................... |<<<<<But why is loneliness cherising you so much and you are not welcoming it! You said that it called you friend; why are you waging a war against it>>>>>| (don't mind the last part of my comment; funny me).

    • 10 years ago

      by Siphosetu Candy

      Thank you so much man for your comments, I will edit my work again and please do keep them coming because I need them to improve my work.