Comments : Peace

  • 10 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    .. Jenni this poem is unbelievable. I have chills all overmy arms haha. I loved how you let it all out here and held nothing back at all. Some of this imagery is stunningly sad and throughout you make the readers heart melt for this person ( whether it's really you or not). I loved the raw emotion at the start. The story of a life is always interesting to me personally. So I fell in love at first sight with this poem. I can connect to the abuse at the start and again I loved the honesty of this. So beautiful and sad. The tone is sad of course but again I loved the powerful ending you did. The power of a feelings poem is always there. The ending is the best part for me. The hope and love you have for yourself is great too. The last line stands out by itself and works well. It wraps up well with what you wanted to say. Overall this poem is unbelievable as I said and speaks for itself. Well done!

  • 10 years ago

    by Siphosetu Candy

    Wow! I haven't beeb touched by a poem like I just had. I am glad that tje writer never chose to kill him/herself.

  • 10 years ago

    by Abed

    Veeeery moving. Inspirational by all means. I LOVE it.