by Beautiful Soul
Haha. I found this poem very comical and loved the flow and tone of it. Yes you are in love with this person and you can tell that in the first few lines. Then it turns funny and a bit dark. I think this outside person might be a person you really dislike. This is a love poem because you seem to be IN love with this person so that sets the tone through out. The lines and poem are short but I think you held a strong message. Well done |