I really was intrigued by this poem...I'm a little surprised to see it in the friendship section? IMO it's a poem about your daily life dealing with your brother's illness so, I think it may fit better in the poems about life category? You leave a lot for the reader to decide here and, that is what I like in a poem...eg...what was in the wooden box? I'd love to know haha!!! Why did Lou think he was born 6'3"?...as I said...intriguing. The only thing that's stopping me nominating this is the lack of punctuation. I'm not a lover of a lot but, sometimes you just need a tiny sprinkle to make a huge improvement.