Comments : Lost in translation.

  • 6 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    The only mistake I saw is breath should be breathe. But this is a really good poem because I can feel the emotion you have used. It seems like you were really hurt by this person and now you just want them to get away from you. The wording is simple but I can imagine you telling this to the person you are writing this about. Overall nice write. 5/5