by Beautiful Soul
This is a good poem. And I loved the emotion even though it is a short poem. My only nitpick is that you should put it into a stanza form that way it will look better and stand out more. But again I loved the message you write about altogether. I can feel the pain this person is going through and you make the pain very vivid and sad. Overall this good and simple :) |
by don
Sad and emotional, but lovely words |