I can't say much about it but you right here
as per me u are saying here. Moon has no gravity still you attract towards moon.
and water always attached due to gravity, that is why you said I love gravity.

If am correctly got your poem then its is good work done by you.

Thanks a lot there Jyoti.

This poem is about my lover. The Moon does have gravity, but my girl has her own and it is more powerful in effecting her.

I also didn't make a spelling mistake with the word "effection". I know it isn't a word. It is a mix of the word "effect" and "affection".

Thanks for commenting.

I really am impressed with this love poem! The senuality is truly a breath of fresh air! Its creative and fun!

I really like how you mixed the words of effect and affection .. that is something that is refreshing to see!

I really wish this was in another category so I can nominate this... however it's in the correct category for sure.. I just really, really adore this poem and wanted to express that!

Excellent title. Did it inspire the poem or the other way round?

Ooh la la. Such attraction.

I suck at writing comments, but I wanted you to know I read this and enjoyed it.

Lovely, heartfelt write. Well written.