Wow I just love this one so much Killian. Like reallyc I just love it.

This is amazing. Its so well written and so relateable. I'm sorry you understand this as well as you do

Awesome poem 5/5 :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)

Beautiful decription of peer pressure and how life demands we act a certain way

excelant poem young lady

don

I think you sum up the pressures young girls are faced with every day, and I fear for my two daughters,

The poem itself is very well written, nice and tight and I love the porcelain doll analogy.

Wow just wow, this is really amazing