Simply excellant, briliant in its prose , one of the best poms i have read, so so good

don

I agree with don. This poem is so very good and sad. The story is great. The beginning starts out as a love story as two people come together through tragedy. A lot of people do this they find comfort through another person. Then through out this poem the depression gets worse. I loved the emotions you used through out this. Love, sadness and darkness. The ending is so so sad. No one knew that this kid who fell in love shot himself. Love can be bad and good and I loved how you showed both sides. So good. I'm going to nominate when I can.