I like the albatross tid-bit. It reminds me of "The Rhyme of the Ancient Mariner". I also enjoy how you paint pictures with your words.

Wow this poem is very dark. The one thing that bugs me though is the capital letters at the beginning of each line. I liked the dark wording you brought to this soft piece. You did well with the contrast. I think what you are saying here is that you love listening to this angel sing and her singing helps you with the pain you are feeling. The different charcters have different personalities. It's not easy to do that. The angel is a beautiful and the main character is riddled with pain and hurt. Anyways I loved the poem as a whole. Beautiful