I loved how you can compare water to life here. The wording you used a metaphor is perfect. Like lukewarm can be considered "normal" and hot and cold can be depression and happiness. The poem is very short but very strong message. Well done!

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I LOVE small poems that pack a punch... When designed in such a way that the reader can take several messages to it, says its a powerful poem... I agree with Beautiful Soul... I like the word usage of Luke Warm! You described the message of life in a very unique and creative way.. really love this!!

Yes, the water of life , name is very nice comparing life with flow of water, life is like a water as hot as cold.
I will also try to write about this topic.

Yes, the water of life , name is very nice comparing life with flow of water, life is like a water as hot as cold.
I will also try to write about this topic.

Yes, the water of life , name is very nice comparing life with flow of water, life is like a water as hot as cold.
I will also try to write about this topic.