Comments : What is peace

  • 8 years ago

    by don

    Seriously emotional, raw, heartfelt write, its beautifull describt poem, about the inner content, likes this a lot


  • 8 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    Short but powerful nicely done :)

  • 8 years ago

    by LittleMsPink

    Some corrections

    (I cry all night because the is no peace at home)
    the should be there

    (They hurt me and the is nobody care about that.)
    i think you should remove "the is" & try care's

    (maybe oeace is waiting for me there.)
    oaece = "peace"

    i think you were in a rush while typing this
    but all in all. i think the poem was great
    short but really heartfelt :)