Seriously emotional, raw, heartfelt write, its beautifull describt poem, about the inner content, likes this a lot

don

Short but powerful nicely done :)

Some corrections

(I cry all night because the is no peace at home)
the should be there

(They hurt me and the is nobody care about that.)
i think you should remove "the is" & try care's

(maybe oeace is waiting for me there.)
oaece = "peace"

i think you were in a rush while typing this
but all in all. i think the poem was great
short but really heartfelt :)