The string of wording is okay. It does go together well to me. Like an argument it starts off slowly then it builds and builds. I like how you did it here too. You start off light asking a question and then it goes and goes. The middle is the anger. And then the ending is filled with hatred and tears. I really enjoyed the emotions you talk about in the deeper meaning. :) well done.

The fight that you can walk away and show restraint is the fight you won don't get me wrong i done stupid things in my life but good read and again great word fraising

The words you use here make this poem amazing. There are not many people who could write a poem like this and still keep the readers attention without getting bored, but you did it so perfectly!

To the point

What makes this so good is it is simple. However, having said that ;your choice of words causes a person to feel that they are in the moment and if not they understand how futile it was to even have argued Great Job.