Comments : Remaining unattained

  • 9 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Pretty. Interesting. I'll talk to you tomorrow about the emotion of this. but for now, the technical comment:

    I think your rhymes were well done and only seemed forced in one or two places. Your flow was flawless, and your style topped that off perfectly. Your word choice was interesting but well used.

    Interesting write.

  • 9 years ago

    by Thandie

    Well written..its indeed interesting