It was meh..

it was weak i think it would look better with pictures.

Like The suspense within the rhymes

Dis was terriblez

These aren’t the actual words, you changed some up

If it's word or it's in a look you can't get rid of the Babadook.
If you're really a clever one and you know what it is to see
Then you can make friends with a special one a friend of you and me.
His name is Mister Babadook and this is his book.

A rumbling sound and three sharp knocks ba Ba ba Dook Dook Dook
That's when you'll know that he's around you'll see him if you look
This is what he wears on top he's funny don't you think?
See him in your room at night and you won't sleep a wink.

I'll soon take of my funny disguise take heed of what you've read
and once you see what's underneath you're going to wish you were dead

I'll wager with you. I'll make you a bet. The more you deny the stronger I get.
You start to change when I get in the Babadook growing right under your skin
Oh come, come see what's underneath!

i did