Comments : Where's your Celebrity now?

  • 10 years ago

    by Darren

    This is a good poem that highlights a problem that has been around for a while but seems to only get worse rather than better, this is despite the fact that we all understand the condition more.

    I have two young daughters 7 and 10 and I have already discussed this subject with both.

    There is a nit in line 33 I think the should be they.

    I like the layout and how you kept each stanza concise and to the point in a narrative tone.
    I also like the inclusion of OMG which gives this poem a real modern feel.

    nice write about a very important subject.

    • 10 years ago

      by Nicole Latham

      Thank you. I wrote it to inspire teens that media posts a lot of stuff and computers can make anyone look perfect. That doesn't mean your not beautiful.

  • 10 years ago

    by Jamparnell

    I'm glad that you wrote this.
    I know a few people that have anorexia and it really is a growing problem.
    Props.

    • 10 years ago

      by Nicole Latham

      Thank you. It makes me sick that the media portrays such fairytale looks. Most of it is computer

  • 10 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    This poem touch me so deeply i know the feeling i love the statement made here people will do almost anything to think they are not ugly when matter of fact they were beautiful to start you show great power here the voice was off the chain really i was sad when got done reading this but this massage at the bottom strong don't be another static everyone is beautiful in their own way loved it nicole peace&love midnight sky

    • 10 years ago

      by Nicole Latham

      Ty. I know some people that o anything to look like the magazine girl. They are getting help now. But it was sad to see old friends that sick. And it inspired me to write this poem.

  • 10 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    This is sad i'm sorry my friend but it is always good to get help

  • 10 years ago

    by Blackbird

    Nicely done. Sends a strong message.

    • 10 years ago

      by Nicole Latham

      Thank you it makes me sick what the media and Photoshop will do for the perfect image and celebrities as well as everyday people would die for that look and sadly most of them do

  • 10 years ago

    by LittleMsPink

    Nice and different, well done 5/5