Comments : The Machine. A play with words.

  • 10 years ago

    by Jay

    I very much enjoyed reading this poem. The depth was intense and my interest held throughout. The imagery clear, I gave it a five! -Jay

    • 10 years ago

      by Jamparnell

      Thank you. I just wrote it right now so I'm delighted to hear that you found it intriguing.
      Comments like yours keeps my writing afloat.
      Thank you again.

  • 10 years ago

    by Trinity Heart

    I love the way it flows and personally I love what "black" says it's beautiful and deadly and the poem is very dark and sad and at the same time calming in a way for those that have been "broken" good job once again 5/5