Comments : YOU NEVER APPRECIATES.

  • 8 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    Very sad talking about this girl who does everything just to some knowledge that she is loved sad yet beautiful p&l midnight sky

  • 8 years ago

    by LittleMsPink

    Some small nitpicks here..
    on the third stanza up to the last paragraph i think its best you remove the 's' in appreciates same goes with the title

    (I tried to be a good girl
    but you never appreciates it.
    I tried to respects you
    but you never appreciates it.
    I tried to obey you
    but you never appreciates it.

    I did all my best to make you happy
    but you never appreciates my effort.)

    appreciates... try "appreciated"

    anyways.. i think this poem speaks so much of how a teenager feels. No matter how much it hurts we should never give up on life, theres always a sun after a rain.
    I can really relate on this one, i wanted to make a poem like this but i just cant find the right words, i think you did a good job :)

  • 8 years ago

    by LittleMsPink

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