Comments : I'm like neo but more of a poet.

  • 11 years ago

    by NiXiT

    I would love to do a reading of this. Poetry readings are my favorite part of poetry and I think this one's flow would be amazing out loud.

    • 11 years ago

      by Postguied Parnell

      I would love for you to.
      If you were to record it and send me a link to where I can hear it I would even appreciate it.

  • 11 years ago

    by LittleMsPink

    I find this deep
    your choice of words, the flow of the poem we're great
    i think you are one talented writer :) 5/5