This had a nice flow through out good job

Good job

This is real poetry. And what I mean by that is this poem is not really riddled with metaphors. I love how you seem to let all of your feelings out. Hatred is a veryhard thing to get rid of. But here I liked how you took one moment and wrote about it. Though I bbelieve hatred builds with time but here it's built to it's peak and you had to write it out. I loved the simplicity of the wording you used here. :) great write! !