This poem to me is just okay. It doesn't shine. I think love poems are very difficult to write because it's hard to make them different. My suggestion for this one is to add punctuation because it's so short. Also don't capitalize all the words at the beginning of the sentences. To me that makes a poem hard to read.

The poems message to me is good. We all want to tell our love how we truly feel. And when we do we just want them to be happy. I think we have all felt this way about someone so it's very relatable. But I think the poem as a whole could be better.