Comments : Thoughts Unraveled.

  • 10 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    This is a honest hearted poem i'm glad i read it good job my friend

  • 10 years ago

    by LittleMsPink

    I think this is really sad and beautiful, it felt like your heart was also in here

    "Stuck in a haze and I can't see,
    He lied to me, I'm flattered"

    i really love that part ^^^
    the part of it being sarcastic made me smile
    5/5 for me and thanks for commenting my poem listen :)