Comments : The Cosmonauts Tick

  • 10 years ago

    by Jamparnell

    From the desk of a younger jacob parnell

  • 10 years ago

    by NiXiT

    I am in love with the lines:

    "I am not a rapper,
    I'm a reader and a writer, and right now I'm not a writer I'm a tick to-ck insight-er with aspiring fires that go brighter and brighter..."

    That flow especially was beautiful. I love reading your work.

    • 10 years ago

      by Jamparnell

      :) thanks.
      This is one of my first poems and I remember being so excited after writing it and reading it to my whole family. I found it today and decided to put it up.