Comments : A broken friendship

  • 10 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    Hmm. I really do like the rhymes here. The message is very strong as well. I think there os true strength in friendship and no matter what happens close friends ever really leave yoi. Though in the beginning when you are trying to grow your friendship it can be difficult. But a true friend will never leave you no matter what. Though here the friendship broke apart and it's very sad when it happens. But always believe it will be okay. Great write. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    I really love this poem
    There is so much emotion that seems to connect with the reader and allows a person to really get captured in the poem
    Amazing

  • 10 years ago

    by Thandie

    It so emotion but lovely.so true and its amazing