I know the feeling.
Hits the heart.

Sad, but a great poem. I can relate to it. great job.

Thanks fellas..

Rsan,

Beautiful job again. So much raw emotion and many of us can relate to this unfortunately.

Em

Hello Rsan

Losing that special someone is one of the worst things we can face in life, however we lose them.

Powerful write,
Ben

Hello,

Sorry about the last comment. To be honest it did read as familiar to me.

This poem is a sad one. When we fall in love with someone and the feeling is not mutual it hurts. From the love at first sight to the capturing of the 'throne' of your heart.

The pain of such an unequal love is unbearable.

A good write.

Take care,

Michael