I really enjoyed this!

I'm sure you'll find your way, keep writing and be proud of this poem! It is definitely well written. Bursting with emotions a reader can feel, connecting them to you!

Walk in love -Jay

Powerful poem, i can relate to this, its really hard to throw out your pride at times even though you really need to and its really hard to feel so insecure
i like this, you have talent, keep writing <3