Dark but beautiful. Loved it. :)

Dark and deep man keep up the good work man exceptional work

I love this poem! It is dark and the depth of the poem is flawless!

Wow Bro! I love the depth that you go into with your writings and this is one of the deepest ones that I've read from you so far. It seems like your dark poetry gets even darker. Keep it up bro, great job

This a great write! I really enjoyed your rhyming and imagery. I also like the dark feelings of it; even one so great, can still fall so far from the light.

Not sure if you noticed, but Stanza 3, line 1;
a world OF chaos and pain?

Again, great write. Interested to read more.

On the part where it said "Monsters devour the wings and rip through the skin," my "wings" winced in pain great poem great flow 5/5