Comments : Broken by Lies

  • 11 years ago

    by Lune de ma vie

    Another poem that surely captures the reader.
    You used a good use of imagery here which helps the reader envision the poem in a easy way.
    The rhyming flowed easily and freely, I enjoyed it and felt what you were trying to portray here..
    I am sorry for the hurt.
    5/5

    • 11 years ago

      by Court

      Honestly, I couldn't get the way it's actually written in my notebook. It flows best almost as two separate poems, with the top line of each stanza as the first, and the bottom line as the second. But thank you very much. :)