Comments : A Flame

  • 9 years ago

    by Lune de ma vie

    OH MY GOODNESS!!!

    This is getting added to one of my favorite poems.

    The vividness of this poem swirled throughout my mind creating such imagery with each word I read. You can add this to dark/horror topics instead of misc if you wanted to it surely fits in that category.

    I am wowed by this poem, you are truly a good poet and deserve much praise for your work. This one could be made into a song I feel even.

    Awesome work.
    5/5

    • 9 years ago

      by Court

      Oh wow, that reaction made me blush. :)
      There are a few poems on here that were inspired by and intended to help a friend of mine. They Have to be powerful to break through to him, and I try to keep reoccurring themes in them. Thank you Very much for the praise.