Comments : A Final Thought

  • 11 years ago

    by Kakera

    Amazing.

  • 11 years ago

    by Smaccams

    I am simply taken aback and everything more - this is fantastic. Absolutely spot on.

    The rhyming, the rhythm, the way it makes the reader just continue non-stop! It's great. I don't even know what to say. I'll let you know what I can say though, and that is that I love the ending and how it all makes meaningful sense!

    'And so enrapture into it's cause,
    He understood what meaning was'

    It's just perfect! Great read, thank you :)

    • 11 years ago

      by Chris Swiderski

      Hehe, well thank you. I'm happy to have put a smile on your face! ^.^

      I actually wrote this while feeling down, as it was an expression of my thoughts on a friend who passed away... What it may have been like in his final moment. Though, he was a cheery fellow, so the poem itself, I felt, had to reflect such.