Really good poem!

This is such a sweet and heartfelt poem, I really enjoyed reading this piece. I can seriously relate to it and the emotions which are pouring out of each stanza. You did a really remarkable job being able to show the reader how deep seeded this love you have is.
5/5

That's such a sweet poem. I'm very jealous of you because I cannot seem to write anything other than dark poetry. Great job, 5/5 Axel. XD

Axel, another beautiful piece by you.

Shows how much this person means to you and how happy hey make you. Love can be so lovely sometimes, it isn't all bad. I like how you are saying you give them the whole of you.

Em