Hey, thanks for commenting on my poem, I really like all your poems, they're really good. I think this one is my favorite, but I can sort of relate to most of them in some way. Great Job! Keep writing!

~*Erika*~

Thanks Erika your support is priceless

"I love how your always willing to help "
-should be "you're"
"I love the way your carefree
Your so enthusiastic and motivated"
-should be "you're" for both of them :-)
"I love how you do the exact opposite
To what ive anticipated."
-I think that makes more sense if it reads "of what I've anticipated." instead of the 'to.'
"I love how your so happy
Happy with what you have got
And that your always aspiring "
-It should be "you're" in the first and last lines

Despite those little errors, I felt that your poem flowed remarkably well. I especially feel that your rhymes were very fluid, and you made some unexpected ones, like smile/miles. I'd just make those corrections I listed above and this poem would be pretty darn good.