Comments : A Break Down in the Rhyme

  • 10 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    Wow.. This poem is perfect. And I love how you ended...

    I just went through a breakup Sunday after the guy I was with cheated on me.. Again..

    This poem really hit hard and I honestly almost couldn't finish reading it. Thanks for sharing.

    • 10 years ago

      by Gianna Cranston

      Thank you, I literally couldn't end the poem because of my tears and emotion. I'm so sorry for what happened. While I wouldn't dare tell you the hurt will go away and to cheer up I will say I hope you find someone who loves and respects you and treats you better, you definitely deserve that.