I love the flow and they rhyme beutiful and sad good job.

-Onyx

So sad..well written

It is wonderful!

Oh this poem is really sad.....
I could feel the sadness and pain in the entire poem.... Each and every line...

Life sometimes does get in the way and makes our living a misery.... It's the sad truth that we can do nothing about.....

I love you last line when you say your are no loner...

A nice write... Keep penning.

Oh this poem is really sad.....
I could feel the sadness and pain in the entire poem.... Each and every line...

Life sometimes does get in the way and makes our living a misery.... It's the sad truth that we can do nothing about.....

I love you last line when you say your are no loner...

A nice write... Keep penning.